16/01/2026
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Part 2
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How to choose good attractive comprehensive title 💥💥
1️⃣ Be Clear before Clever
• The reader should understand the topic instantly
• Avoid vague or poetic phrases
❌ “New Insights into Pediatric Diseases”
✅ “Serum Ferritin as a Predictor of Disease Severity in Pediatric Sepsis”
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2️⃣ Include the Core Elements
A good title usually contains 2–3 of the following:
• Main variable (exposure/intervention)
• Outcome
• Population
• Study design (optional but powerful)
Example:
👉 Vitamin D Deficiency and Risk of Asthma Exacerbations in School-Aged Children: A Case–Control Study
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3️⃣ Use Specific, Searchable Keywords
• Think like PubMed, not like poetry
• Use terms commonly searched in your field
• Avoid unnecessary abbreviations
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4️⃣ Keep It Concise (but Complete)
Ideal length: 10–15 words
• Too short → unclear
• Too long → exhausting
💡 If needed, use a subtitle:
Early Cardiac Involvement in MIS-C: A Prospective Echocardiographic Study
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5️⃣ Match the Title to the Study Type
• Observational: association, prevalence, predictors
• Interventional: effect, efficacy, impact
• Diagnostic: accuracy, validity, performance
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6️⃣ Avoid Common Mistakes ❌
• “A study of…”
• “Our experience with…”
• “Novel”, “Unique”, “First-ever” (editors dislike hype)
• Claims not supported by results
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7️⃣ Quick Title Checklist ✔️
Before submission, ask:
• Is it accurate?
• Is it specific?
• Is it search-friendly?
• Does it reflect the main finding?